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Waking with dew drops by ~PAYNSGREY:iconPAYNSGREY:



Waking with dew drops


Unfaded spring that blossoms
With fragrance splendid and sprightly,
You and you alone make me feel life
Like waking at dawn with dew drops
Other men have seen angels,
But I have fallen for you
and thou art enough.
©2008-2009 ~PAYNSGREY
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Author's Comments

my first try in writing found poetry


constrcucted from quotations written by:

Pedro Calderon de la Barca
George Edward Moore

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:iconberylalexandros:
Is that supposed to be "But I have have fallen for you", or is there only supposed to be one "have"?

That's a very sweet poem. That someone very special is very lucky to have a poem like that written about them :)

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:icondesert-lilly:
It's a lovely poem, but correct the double "have" in the second last line.

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"He had a heart that could have held the empire of the world; and, in the end, he had to content himself with a cellar."

"Oh, well I never, was there ever a cat so clever as Magical Mister Mistofelees?"
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thanx a lot i appriciate and thanx for the correction..honestly that missed my eye. i was so exited when posted that. lo!

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“Death, the only immortal who treats us all alike, whose pity and whose peace and whose refuge are for all—the soiled and the pure, the rich and the poor, the loved and the unloved.” —Twain’s last written statement
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thanx a lot. also thanx a lot for the correction. did niot notice that..was so excited when i posted that. lol!

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“Death, the only immortal who treats us all alike, whose pity and whose peace and whose refuge are for all—the soiled and the pure, the rich and the poor, the loved and the unloved.” —Twain’s last written statement
:iconpaynsgrey:
i mean excited! not exited lol!

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“Death, the only immortal who treats us all alike, whose pity and whose peace and whose refuge are for all—the soiled and the pure, the rich and the poor, the loved and the unloved.” —Twain’s last written statement
:icondesert-lilly:
S'okay. It happens to me a lot. Once I couldn't get into a forum I had joined because I didn't realise that I had spelled my username wrong when I submitted it. Then, of course, the right spelling wouldn't get me in.

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"He had a heart that could have held the empire of the world; and, in the end, he had to content himself with a cellar."

"Oh, well I never, was there ever a cat so clever as Magical Mister Mistofelees?"
:iconmintleaves:
Really lovely poem. It flows beautifully. :) I am sure that the special person you dedicated this to will love it very much.

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it's spring when the world is puddle-wonderful
:iconhaikukitty:
Waking with dew drops, what a splendid image - you found this poem very well! :clap:

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"His thoughts tumbled in his head, making and breaking alliances like underpants in a dryer without Cling Free. " Unknown
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thanx =)

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“Death, the only immortal who treats us all alike, whose pity and whose peace and whose refuge are for all—the soiled and the pure, the rich and the poor, the loved and the unloved.” —Twain’s last written statement

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